Wednesday, February 26, 2014
500 Word Fiction Short Story !
I Remember getting a phone
call from Jake that he planned a vacation for all of us Me,
Jenny . Matt and of course Brad and Ally . We was getting ready to go and
just couldn’t believe we was all going
on a big trip he said he had everything planned for a while .for all of us
to all be together for the last summer
because of jenny moving to Texas and
matt was getting married and moving too . This was the last summer we was all
going to be together for the last time . It was going to be a summer to
remember I packed all my things and drove to
Jake’s house and seen everyone there and just knowing that im not gonna
see them no more was hurting me they
were my bestfriends and I knew we all had to make sure jenny and matt had there best vacation ever so we started getting our
things and putting it in the RV and
finally driving off jake didn’t tell us where we was going he said it
was a “surprise” for all of us I just kept thinking were he is going the entire
time he said “ calm down” I was over
thinking if I wanted to go to this trip
but I couldn’t say take me back it was matt and jenny last day at Kansas
with us im not going to
leave them and stay home I
just went along with it . Hours Passed and we was still .driving I went
to look out the window and we was in the
middle of no where jake probably didn’t know were he went we drove for hours
and hours without a brake I remember telling him to pull over and see if he seen a near by gas
station or somebody to help us find were he was suppose to go but
he didn’t listen instead he drove and faster and faster without stopping . I asked why he didn’t say anything to
us? Why is he so jumpy about everything? It was something
weird that I couldn’t put my finger on but I knew jake was
acting weird about it . I was getting worried I wanted to get
up and ask him
but I couldn’t I just thought maybe
he found hes way were he wanted to go me
and jenn got even more worried because he wasn’t acting as usual like if something was inside him telling him
stuff . Matt was talking to jake but he wouldn’t say a word he just stared at him and shook hes head he said “ something is
wrong with him “ all I can remember was
he drove and I still remember the car falling on a edge and the
car kept rolling and rolling and we was all
screaming of fear and I was the only one to survive in the crash
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Wooow. I wanna know what was wrong with him! Great psychologically scary story involving close friends. The end of summer, end of life thing is nice. We're going to work on punctuation and grammar and stuff. In the end, a great story like this can be tough to understand if grammar, punctuation, and usage isn't stable. That's little stuff, though, and I'm here to help with that (pretty good at it, too)! You keep coming up with fabulous, creative ideas and we'll work together on the other stuff. Great stuff, Aslin!
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